Sea Turtles
LG To be able to write an explanation in away that enough detail/info for my reader.
sos
- Use a title.
- Timeless-present tense.
- precise language-key words.(subject-specific).
- Technical words.
- cause and effect.
- descriptive verbs.
sea turtles have been around since the lat jurasek. 800 get lad 400 hach 40 it to the sea 20 make it through breeding age without human interference. 2 make it to reading age human interference fact They eat jellyfish & sponge. When baby sea turtles are Young They are Defenseless And when they go up there and they can Eat more stuff That is the gauntlet of a sea turtle.
Room 15
by Matthew Wood
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ReplyDeleteDear Mathew
ReplyDeleteI like the way you pronounced about sea turtles for example sea turtles have been around since the late jurassic.
I like the way you used persuasive words for example Defenceless,interference and gauntlet.
next time you could add more detail for example these turtles are very rear to ocean sea life.
From Rinoa
Dear Matthew
ReplyDeleteI liked it how u added facts about their food
I also liked it how you add how many get born, make it to sea, and stay alive.
What u need to work on is your spelling
From cohen