Moment in time
L.G Be able to write a moment in time
S.O.S
- Use interesting and engaging
- Use an interesting beginning to hook in the reader
- Use a variety of Descriptive language and features use paragraphs
“ You can do this”You can do this” i try to keep encouraging myself because I am freaking out on the inside.
1 more group before us my heart was pounding my head was throbbing and my brain was drifting off thinking about what was about to happen okay i am definitely freaking out.
Hopping into the inflatable donut feeling so anxious about what's about to happen “ Right Jenna you go in the front and i will go in the back I hear Bayliee yell over top of the screaming people going down the rides here we go she yelled