Moment in time

L.G Be able to write a moment in time

S.O.S

• Use interesting and engaging
• Use an interesting beginning to hook in the reader
• Use a variety of Descriptive language and features use paragraphs

“ You can do this”You can do this” i try to keep encouraging myself because I am freaking out on the inside.

1 more group before us my heart was pounding my head was throbbing and my brain was drifting off thinking about what was about to happen okay i am definitely freaking out.

Hopping into the inflatable donut feeling so anxious about what's about to happen “ Right Jenna you go in the front and i will go in the back I hear Bayliee yell over top of the screaming people going down the rides here we go she yelled  

from Jenna