Thursday, October 15, 2015

             
                   LG: To create a piece of writing that instructs.
SS: To write clear instructions that explain what to do.
  • List of materials
  • Bossy words
  • Order words
  • Adjectives
  • Verbs
      
Shoe Box Mazes

What you will need:
  • Vivid
  • 2 seeds
  • 1 Plastic cup
  • cardboard
  • Scissors
  • Sellotape
  • ipad/camera
  • Shoe box
  • Paint/ brush
Method
Step1 Get a vivid and draw a little box at the top of the shoe box.
Step 2 Cut out the little square.
Step 3  Get some pieces of cardboard.
Step 4 Get a plastic cup and fill it up with soil to the top.
Step 5 Put two seeds in the cup.
Step 6  Put some water in the cup .
Step 7 Put the plant in the box.
Step 8 If you want to, paint you shoe box .
Step 9 If you don’t know how to make a shoe box maze you have to get. pieces of cardboard 10cm long by 13 cm deep sellotape it to the opposite sides of the shoe box maze.  
Step 10 Don’t forget to water it every day.
Step 11 Record the growth of your plant.

By Brody Savage.
Room 15        
Year 6

2 comments:

  1. Hi Brody!!!
    I like the you clearly stated your materials and instructions
    you also did a really good job in using your order words
    Maybe next time change your first words up a bit instead of just writtiting put,put,put & get,get,get

    from brianna d : )

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  2. hi Brody
    I like the way you put the suff so we no what to get.
    I like the way you put step in to it.
    next time look for mistacks.
    from Rose Ford

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