Moment in time

L.G Be able to write a moment in time

S.O.S

• Use interesting and engaging
• Use an interesting beginning to hook in the reader
• Use a variety of Descriptive language and features use paragraphs

“ You can do this”You can do this” i try to keep encouraging myself because I am freaking out on the inside.

1 more group before us my heart was pounding my head was throbbing and my brain was drifting off thinking about what was about to happen okay i am definitely freaking out.

Hopping into the inflatable donut feeling so anxious about what's about to happen “ Right Jenna you go in the front and i will go in the back I hear Bayliee yell over top of the screaming people going down the rides here we go she yelled  

from Jenna

25 April 1950

As I land in Anzac cove my legs are

Asleep from the long journey here. as I struggle up the dirty,dusty,dump hills I smell the revolting smell of rotting dead people and food. As I work through the fields I see dead bodies scattered throughout the fields tears start to flow down my cheeks like a fast flowing river as I think about my beautiful family most of all I miss my kids my 2 year old son and my 8 year daughter I miss them already and it hasn't even been a week we have to carry half of our Bodie wait just on our backs not including our gun and bullets. We set up camp and dig our trenches  and try and get some sleep and start attacking tomorrow

from jenna

L.G to create our school mihi.

Te Kura O Whakaahurangi Mihi.

Kia Ora Koutou Katoa .

Greetings to you all.

Ko Jenna taku ingoa .

My name is Jenna .

Ko Lisa taku mama .

My Mother is Lisa .

Ko Jeremy taku papa.

My Father's name is Jeremy.    

No Whakaahurangi ahou.

I am from Stratford.

Tekau ma rua tau .

I am 12 years old.

Ko matua Geoff te kaiako.

My teacher's name is Geoff .

No te Whanau whitu waru ahau.

I am from the year 7/8  team .

Ko matua Jason te tumuaki o taku kura.

Jason is the principal of my school .

No reira e te Whanau ka nui te mihi .

Therefore an extended greetings to our school family.

Tena koutou,tena koutou, tena tatou katoa.

Greetings,greetings,greetings to us all.

By Jenna